CENTENARY OF THE BOLSHEVIK REVOLUTION

Leave out from 'notes' to 'again' in Line 2 and add, 'that 7 November 2017 marks 100 years since Russia's Bolshevik Revolution, whilst the uprising of the Russian people was understandable given the country's history of starvation, grinding poverty, autocratic rule and the experience of the Great War, subsequent history demonstrates, however'.